superman33's OTA Application

Discussion in 'Denied' started by superman33, Aug 22, 2013.

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  1. superman33

    superman33 Guest

    Member Name:
    boring
    Steam Name:
    fuckoff
    Steam ID:
    whatisthis
    Roleplay Experience:
    very gud at cumbeanrp pls accpet
    Roleplay Example:
    me kills rebel
    Backstory:
    is superman and here to kill everyun
    Character Name:
    supershit
    Physical Description::
    strong smart
    Skills/Talents:
    all
    Fears/Disabilities:
    none
    What is your MPF rank?:
    SeC
    Will you remain loyal to the UU?:
    No
     
  2. Creeper Joe™

    Creeper Joe™ Donator

    Just, quit.

    Your SteamID can be found at http://steamidfinder.com/
    You powergame in your roleplay example and its way too short, try turning it into a proper roleplay scenario. Also, we don't agree on 1-hit kills unless both party's agree
    Your back story is also very short, and doesn't describe your life at all.
    Your character name is unfitting, try coming up with something like "Andrian Von Hengelstein"
    Physical description lacks detail, try to make it an accurate, detailed description of how your character looks.
    Skills are overpowered, try to balance your traits
    No man, on the globe of earth, has no fears/disabilities, try being creative and coming up with some.
    Also, you lie in your app, which is a bad thing at all.
    And at last, you have the final answer wrong.

    -SUPPORT
     
  3. Max

    Max Server Administrator Admin/Moderator

    You don't apply to OTA like this.
     
  4. Antti

    Antti Owner Staff Member Owner

    It's obivous why this is being denied.
    I'm not even going to explain myself.

    LOCKED & DENIED & MOVED
     
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